You shouldn’t look inside your head for the messages that will convince your prospects.
You’re not your prospect. So how the hell could you know what they need to hear? It’s vanity to think you could.
Instead of writing your message, steal it. Steal it directly from your prospects. (tweet this)
I’ve given that piece of copywriting advice about a million times – including here, here, here and here – but never explicitly on this ‘ere Copyhackers blog, strangely. And as a result, if you’ve heard that “Amazon review mining” or “TripAdvisor review mining” is something you should do to find your message and write better copy, you’re probably missing out on this teensy little point: how to do it.
First, here’s the idea.
If your message doesn’t come from you but rather from your prospect, then it holds that you should listen very closely to what your prospect says when she’s discussing products and services that either a) are yours or b) are similar to yours. Their words become yours. You’ll take what they say, and mirror it back to them
There are many ways to listen to your prospects. Most of them favor businesses with existing customers, a decent number of site visitors, or a solid and engaged email list. For example:
But what if you have zilch-o in the customer department?
Or what if – more likely – you’re totally terrified to get on the phone with a customer and interview them?
That’s where review mining is a godsend. Because products and services like yours already exist, it’s likely that people who have purchased and/or used those products and services have shared their opinions about them somewhere online. You can read through those reviews. Learn what people love, hate, and are worried about. Learn what their expectations and motivations are for solutions like yours. And even find really sticky messages.
If you’ve seen me speak, you’ve seen me on Mixergy or you’ve read my ebooks, you might recognize this example.
I was working with a rehab center called Beachway, and I was struggling to find test-worthy messages because it was very, very difficult to interview past or existing customers and to survey them. This was largely because the subject matter was so emotional, coating the things I wanted to know – the drivers that pushed them to rehab, their fears about rehab – in either a lot of sugar or a lot of vinegar. It was hard to get true insights… so I turned to Amazon.
I looked up the following 6 books on Amazon:
It wasn’t the books themselves I was interested in. It was both the subject matter and, most importantly, the reviews actual readers had left.
For maybe 2 or 3 hours, I read through more than 500 reviews. I copied the actual language that book reviewers were using in their reviews, and I pasted their words – with as few ‘summaries’ or abstractions as possible – into 1 of 3 tables, exactly like so:
After I’d mined those reviews, I read through them… and one direct quote from a reviewer stood out more than the others. It became the following headline:
We tested that headline against the control, which was “Your Addiction Ends Here”. The new headline – the one I found in Amazon reviews – brought in >400% more clicks on the orange button… and >20% more lead-gen form submits on the next page. To be clear, that means the headline on the home page impacted sign-ups on the next page. That’s a powerful headline. And no other treatment has managed to beat, “If you think you need rehab, you do.”
When I was writing the Google Play description for the latest version of Flow recently, I went through the user reviews of the Flow app as well as the reviews of competing apps – like Asana, in particular.
What I found became a guide for my rewrite of the description. I found myself asking MetaLab’s Android developer Qs like these before I wrote a word:
When you go through user reviews one by one, what’s really important to your prospects rises to the top. You see recurring questions, and recurring statements. You hear their frustrations, and you can feel their excitement.
This all makes its way into your copy and messaging hierarchy – the things you need to say, and the order in which your visitors need to read them. Naturally, this exercise reveals not only pure gold for copywriting, but also for product development.
Before you even start digging through Amazon, TripAdvisor, iTunes, AngiesList, Yelp, YouTube comments, IMDB or HealthGrades – among a million other review sites – you’re probably going to run into a question I get a lot: “What product should I look for?”
“We’re trying to get small businesses to choose our law practice. What books should I read?”
“We’re trying to sell bookbags to moms. There are no books about bookbags, and the reviews for bookbags don’t reveal much.”
“We’re trying to sell trips to Africa, but there aren’t any reviews on TripAdvisor for non-safaris in Africa.”
Deciding what books – or products – to read the reviews for is usually the hardest part. And it can get frustrating. So let me clarify. You are NOT trying to find reviews for products exactly like yours. If you can, great, but that’s super-rare. What you’re trying to do is figure out how your prospects feel, what they think, and what they love, hate, worry about, etc. Which means…
So it’s not about a book, or a trip, or a contractor, or an app.
It is about people first. That should not surprise you. After all, if we say anything on repeat around here, it’s this: it’s not about you, it’s about your prospects. That mindset will carry you successfully through any and every copywriting challenge you ever face.
So before you head to AngiesList to see how to sell a hammer, ask yourself these questions, in this order, to reveal the reviews you should go in search of, and where to look:
To illustrate how this works, let’s look at the Beachway example again.
So I’d go to Amazon and AAGrapevine, and there I would pore over what my prospects are writing there and fill this up.
Let’s try it again – but this time for something hard, like selling a SaaS solution for HR. I totally randomly thought this up, Googled it, and found this site: https://www.workday.com/. So let’s pretend we’re going to try to find test-worthy messages and stickier copy for Workday. We’ll have to make some assumptions here ‘cos I’m not sure who their target audience is, but let’s give it a shot nonetheless.
Lots of places to go looking for your messages, right? Watch the following video to see a shortened version of how I’d start analyzing Amazon reviews:
What do you think?
Are you prepared to go boldly and confidently swipe messages from your prospects… without anyone being the wiser? Are you ready to stop beating your head against the wall wondering what the Helsinki to write? Or is this just too damn simple to work?
~jo
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