If You Charge 10x More Than Your Competition, Should Your Copy Be 10x As Compelling?

OCT 8, 2014 UPDATE: We’re experimenting with Bounce Exchange on right now. So you can expect a follow-up post on this subject.

There’s a ton of buzz on The Internets about the importance of building email lists. And few people (certainly no experienced marketers) dispute email’s potential effectiveness for building relationships with customers and prospective customers…

So it should come as no surprise that oodles – yes, oodles – of startups and established companies are creating tools to help you build your list. I’m guessing that you employ at least one such solution on your site…

One of the most talked-about tools for boosting your subscriber base is this: the modal opt-in form. AKA, overlay. AKA, email lightbox. AKA, HTML pop-up. [BTW, can we not agree on a name here? For some reason, nobody has coined a term that’s stuck. No matter… in this post, I’ll refer to them simply as overlays.]

OptinMonster’s Example Overlay

Some site owners swear by them. Others won’t risk infuriating overlay (not overly) sensitive visitors. Whether you love ‘em or you hate ‘em, it’s tough to argue with the conversion results being touted. [We at Copy Hackers know it’s not just about the numbers, but that’s the subject of another post.]

One company that’s been making waves pushing the boundaries of list building with overlays is Bounce Exchange, in part because they take a very different approach to targeting visitors, and also due to their pricing structure (more on that soon).

While standard overlay tools allow you to configure scenarios by which to trigger an overlay on your site – typically based on visitor time on page or percent of page scrolled – Bounce Exchange let you target visitors who are about to leave your site. At its core, their tool gives you one extra shot at selling your visitor on becoming an email subscriber.

What’s particularly fascinating about Bounce Exchange’s twist on the traditional overlay is the price of their offering – which starts at $3995 per month. And their competitors, while not necessarily in the 4-digit range, are certainly more expensive than your average $49/month digital marketing SaaS tool.

So what brought me to write this post was a search for Bounce Exchange alternatives…

Over the past few months, a number of Copy Hackers readers have reached out to enquire about exit overlay tools, and while we’ve written a little about them (e.g., the copy used on the overlays), we’ve never really dug into how companies sell this type of product…

On my search for Bounce Exchange competitors, I was directed to a Quora page that included this rich discussion.

One of the Quora commenters had this to say:

I’ve spent a good few months trying to work out how on earth people have been building such huge revenue streams on a product that cannot really be defended. As one of the answers below shows, there is some code available that lets you do it for free.”

— Ivan Mazour, CEO and Founder of Ometria

That one comment got me thinking: How does Bounce Exchange do it?

I mean, there are at least 10 apparently viable solutions listed on the Quora page alone, including the aforementioned 100% free solution.

If you’re skeptical of free, then there’s OptinMonster, a WordPress plug-in that claims to deliver a similar result to Bounce Exchange, except that you pay a one-time fee of $199, which lets you use the tool on an unlimited number of websites.

So with these more wallet-friendly alternatives that appear to offer similar functionality, how is it that I keep hearing about Bounce Exchange?

And how does Bounce Exchange charge 10x to 100x more than their competitors?

And what can we learn from Bounce Exchange’s sales copy – if anything – so we, too, can earn 10x the revenue per user?

It was time to look at the sales pages of several exit overlay products, starting with Bounce Exchange.

For the 3 home pages discussed, I’ll assess the main components of each page so  you can apply our thought process to your own site. Let’s dig in… 

Assessing Bounce Exchange’s Copy

Service Starts at: $3995/mo

Bounce Exchange Home Page


For maximum effectiveness, headlines need to build desire and communicate exclusivity (the 2 key ingredients to a unique value proposition). I’d argue that turning “abandoning visitors into customers” is pretty darned desirable. And when you compound that with the subhead’s explicit mention of exclusivity – delivered by their “exit-intent technology” – you have a powerful start to the home page.

Primary CTA

Every CTA on this page leads to the demo request form at the bottom of the page. The use of the phrase “Apply for a Personal Demo” as the section heading is not likely an accident, and it may even add to the desirability of their solution.

But take a step back… Is a demo request form the ideal home page CTA? What about pairing the demo request with an amazing case study (delivered immediately by email) of how Bounce Exchange led to a 337% lift in email subscribers? I don’t see anything like that here.

Video / Demo

The short video at the top of the page does a nice job of explaining a key feature of Bounce Exchange, their “Exit Intent Technology”. However, there is no obvious demonstration of the product in action. When you decide it’s time to leave the site, you’ll trigger a Bounce Exchange exit overlay, but this approach seems suboptimal, since I’m ready to leave.

Why not give me a button that triggers an overlay as many times as I like so that I can see the various trigger events?

In addition, back on the topic of CTAs, I recommend telling visitors what they can expect to see when a sales representative calls. Don’t leave me guessing, because I’ll always assume the worst.

Supporting Copy

It’s clear that Bounce Exchange differentiates itself through its patented technology. Using the term “patented” definitely asserts their leadership in the space and may even allow them to enforce market leadership through litigation (no comment). Conveying exclusivity is critical in a fast-growing product niche, and these guys do it well.

In moving down the page, the copy loses some of its luster. The “Digital Pain Points” are generic and could be used on any site. A better alternative would be to include info about how Bounce Exchange overcomes the pain points.

More disturbing is how little copy is dedicated to overcoming marketer objections. We know objections exist at any price point – but especially for solutions that cost thousands per month.

It’s typically advisable – when you can anticipate visitors being shell-shocked by pricing – to acknowledge the anxiety and neutralize the perceived risk of making such a large investment. A well-placed FAQ (e.g., below a pricing table) can help overcome visitor objections in a non-salesy way.

Supporting Images

Single page websites can work amazingly well (especially when structured as a narrative that walks you through a solution), but no matter how hard you work on the copy for your one pager, visitors still expect to see what they’re [considering] paying for.

For Bounce Exchange, there isn’t a single screenshot of the admin tool or backend reporting. Even a few quality shots could alleviate visitor angst about the cost.

The “Data Brain” image consumes a lot of real estate – especially to explain a single product feature – and the image is conceptual (i.e., not an actual screenshot).

Social Proof / Testimonials

While there are 2 testimonials and 3 mentions by institutions/publications, there are no in-depth case studies that demonstrate product value through the words of customers. In addition, the word “Trophies” in the top navigation may confuse some visitors. (Remember, don’t make me think.)


Why wouldn’t Bounce Exchange offer some kind of satisfaction guarantee? I assume many potential customers will worry about the risk of spending $4000+ per month on an unproven (to them) solution.

Pricing Table

While the heading “Pricing Structure” may sound substantial, it’s no clearer than simply “Pricing” or “Plans & Pricing” and may actually conflate things. Much of the copy within the table is working well to position Bounce Exchange as an upscale offering, but it could be doing much more.

Should Bounce Exchange charge 10x more?Key differentiators such as…

  • Exit Intent Technology
  • Full Service Campaign Management
  • Premium Graphic Services
  • Dedicated Conversion Director

… sound great, but the upscale phrasing could really use some support – in the form of concise, mouse over descriptions. It’s not enough to say “full service”, “premium”, or “conversion director”; there is simply too much room for interpretation. This is the time to sell prospects on the premium services included, since the monthly fees are staring visitors in the face.


When we break down the home page by looking at how visitors might research an exit overlay solution, it’s clear Bounce Exchange is doing some interesting (and I would argue effective) things with their copy. But there is still plenty of room to improve.

It’s possible that their marketing force (i.e., speed and reach of their marketing) is what’s enabling them to charge a premium… rather than their marketing copy.

On the same Quora thread where I learned about their competitors, I read that Bounce Exchange employs a team of salespeople, which sounds feasible given their price point. I’d love to see the language used in their sales scripts, because I’m betting there’s more in those scripts than what’s currently being used on the website.

Assessing Exit Monitor’s Copy

Service Starts at: $249/mo

Exit Monitor Home Page


The headline/subhead are a decent starting point, but some quick A/B testing could make a real difference. The word “we” is generally a no-no on any web page, let alone on the home page. I also worry that “exiting” will be read by many as “existing”, which would take some of the steam out of the headline.

Desirability. Check (who doesn’t want more leads?). Uniqueness. Not so much. What can Exit Monitor do for customers that no competitor can do (or do as well)?

In the subhead, “start measuring” isn’t very compelling, but I do think the immediacy of “right now” works well.

Primary CTA

While there is a demo request positioned at the bottom of the page, the primary CTA is the signup button (located in the hero and the pricing table).

If I’ve visited the Bounce Exchange site and then Exit Monitor’s, I would see quite a contrast… going from no way to sign up (demo request only) to an easy way to see what Exit Monitor is all about – with no commitment (there’s no credit card required on the signup form).

The phrase “sign up” is an opportunity to improve, as surely there’s more behind the button that just a signup form. I mean, yes, there’s a signup form present, but what do I get once I complete a few fields?

Video / Demo

The Exit Monitor marketing team has chosen not to use an explainer video. Perhaps because there is a quick signup to start using the product, they felt it wasn’t necessary.

However, the right explainer video can do a ton of heavy lifting to get visitors interested… and there are some amazing free tools to help you create one.

Similar to the Bounce Exchange site, there is no obvious demonstration of the product in action (again, you have to be on your way out before you see what an exit overlay looks like). Exit Monitor team, here’s your chance to do more for your visitors than your competition.

Supporting Copy

The supporting copy is solid… concise, easy to digest, and well formatted for scanning, but it could include a few more benefit statements.

And once again, the page is light on addressing visitors’ objections to trying (and then paying for) the product. If you know your target market, you know what questions and objections they’ll have. A little user research goes a long way to developing killer copy.

Supporting Images

There’s nothing offensive about the supporting images on the page, but why is there only one actual product screenshot (and a chopped one at that)? I suspect that $249/month and up is not a trivial expense for most businesses, so don’t make visitors signup to see what the product looks like. A few high-quality shots could really get people excited and persuade them to try it.

Social Proof / Testimonials

This site is also very light on social proof. The closest match is the list of product integrations, but as social proof, it’s a stretch.


Free plan aside, at these price points (like for Bounce Exchange) I would expect to see some kind of satisfaction guarantee. You don’t have to give me an outright refund, but assure me of something.

Pricing Table

Charge 10x more in your pricing table (Exit Monitor)As pricing tables go, this one looks decent. The reminder about no credit card requirement may help drive clicks on the signup buttons. It’s clear how the plans are differentiated, and the set of product features listed isn’t too long.

As for potential improvements, which plan is most popular? Also, the primary cost driver for each plan is “pageviews”, but what exactly does that mean? Is it the number of times an exit overlay is displayed across all pages? The total number of page views on my site? Is it a monthly limit? If visitors aren’t 100% sure, they may sign up for the most basic plan available and tell themselves that they’ll upgrade later (which is not ideal for the business).

One additional question: At what point will I be asked for my credit card? Is this a time-limited trial?


While there is nothing off-putting about the site – and I’m sure first-time visitors will love the free Starter plan – a visitor-triggered demonstration of the product, a handful of attractive product shots, and some solid social proof would build a much stronger case for a trial run.

Assessing Picreel’s Copy

Service Starts at: $19/mo

Picreel Home Page


At first glance, there is a lot going right with Picreel’s home page, starting with the headline/subhead.

“Recover abandoning visitors” is highly desirable. The use of bolding focused your eyes on the right words. And the subhead delivers exclusivity with the phrase, “the most powerful…” – very nice. The layout, however, with the copy to the left of the old-looking video, dates the hero section.

Primary CTA

There are 2 closely weighted (i.e., same size but different colors) CTAs on the page, repeated several times as you move down (which I think is an innovative design choice).

The copy “Start Free Trial” probably works, but why not remind visitors of your promise – instead, going with something like “Reduce Your Bounce Rate”?

And finally, this is a site that lets me see a live demo of an exit overlay as often as I like. Score! When you have a product that’s in a competitive space and that’s relatively expensive, demo it!

Video / Demo

There’s a video with a chunky play button. The video is just over a minute long. And you learn there’s a 30-day trial – and no credit card needed. There’s even an arrow to direct your attention to the explainer video, positioned nicely over the secondary CTA.

With the great headline, clear CTAs, ability to demo, and explainer video, the hero section real estate is being used extremely well.

Supporting Copy

The section below the hero – grammatical error aside (spot it?) – is helpful and it finishes with 2 strong benefit statements. So far so good.

Below that, you see the “What do you get…” section, which probably anticipates a key question visitors will have when they arrive.

Each section that follows includes a benefit statement and is formatted for quick scanning (without losing meaning). It feels like the Picreel team spent some time massaging their messages.

Supporting Images

There’s a big focus on social proof on Picreel’s home page, which comes through clearly in the imagery. But like the other 2 sites, there is a lack of product shots, even in the explainer video (where there are none).

There is a single, partial product shot that teases some of the product’s capabilities, but have these guys not seen what Apple does with its home page (and product pages)? 🙂

Social Proof / Testimonials

BOOM! This is what we’ve been waiting for. First you see an unobtrusive list of customers (I assume they’re customers) directly below the hero. Then about 2/3rds of the way down the page, you’re shown a list of actual exit overlays from Picreel’s customers (killing 2 birds with 1 stone!).

PicReel Social ProofAnd then you’re given a scrolling selection of customer testimonials – with examples of how Picreel solves pain and headshots of the customers (for credibility). Alongside the testimonials are 14 clickable customer logos that lead to detailed case studies… that include conversion rates achieved and numbers of monthly leads generated (as well as a list of reference customers grouped by business vertical!).

Picreel competitors, take note.


Picreel doesn’t offer an explicit guarantee, but its signup page includes a series of promises that are somewhat reassuring. A guarantee would be much better though.

Picreel Pricing Page

Pricing Table

Picreel’s pricing table lives on its own, but it’s as solid as the home page.

Let’s see… a clear title… some persuasive lead-in copy… a well-structured table with clear copy and a “Popular” indicator… a plan breakdown that makes sense… more social proof (repeated from home page)… and a helpful FAQ that anticipates common visitor objections. What’s not to love?


Looking at the copy on Picreel’s home page and its reasonably priced plans, and as someone who is open to experimenting with different opt-in tools, they make a compelling case for me to take the next step.

One final thought…

Not surprisingly, all of these companies have positioned the exit overlay as a more sophisticated (and therefore more valuable?) version of the traditional email opt-in overlay.

What do I mean by that? Well, you don’t see these terms used on their home pages:

  • Email List Builder
  • Exit Pop-up

Instead, you see:

  • Bounce Traffic Optimization
  • Page Exit Recovery System
  • Automated Customer Acquisition

Wouldn’t you pay more for the latter solutions than the former? [My question is only partially tongue-in-cheek.]

In fact, how you describe and position your product has a lot to do with the price people are willing to pay for it.

We’re not advocating the use of hyperbole, complicated language, or marketing-heavy buzzwords, but the next time you tweak your home page copy, be sure to use language that accurately conveys the full value or your product or service. Push beyond the obvious lingo.

Agree? Disagree?

Based on what you’ve seen, which of the 3 options seems to be worth $3995/mo? What would YOU need to hear to spend that kind of money?



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  • Al

    With BounceX the real value comes from the the creative process (that’s part of their service) AND the knowledge they have from doing this for X years and how that drives the creative process. If you start an exit intent strategy and use a basic platform then you have to go through a journey with the creatives to find the one that responds to users best. If BounceX accelerates this through years of knowledge then that can have a significant impact on return. Yieldify ( have a very similar approach.

    It’s possible that you may never reach peak return on an exit intent strategy unless you have experts guiding you.

    It’s a mechanismsthat the team at use to get clients a faster return, having an expert build your creatives will not only get you somewhere better (sooner) but it releases internal resource to work on something else.

  • Kira Kumin

    Great review! Always interesting to see how pricing and quality match up to each other through a companies copy.
    Another alternative I suggest is Reactful ( ). With BX, you need them as an agency to change the content for you, whereas, with Reactful, there is more focus on the tech driving the needed changes.

  • Valentin Radu

    Unfortunatelly (for us), you’ve missed us.
    That’s how we’ve missed the opportunity to have a free audit from you, guys!
    Anyway, if you decide to update, take a look at
    On-exit overlayers are just a small part of what our CRO platform can do for you 😉

  • Ann Ferri

    Bounce exchange is an awesome tool. The designs and support are outstanding. However, as a marketer, I cannot go to my boss and recommend the tool, which costs thousands. True, they offer discounts and special offers, but still that’s expensive. There are several good alternatives, and I suggest to look through Quora topic: . Anyway, the article is awesome. Copyhackers has always presented some great reviews of technology.

  • How’s Bounce Exchange doing for you?

  • There’s one metric that matters when choosing a $4K (or any other) solution; lifetime customer value. When you know that, you can answer the question “Do I have a freakin’ prayer of makin’ a ROI if I spend $4K on this?” If your average lifetime customer value is such that you can answer yes to that question, and your budget dictates it’s a viable alternative, you can start talkin’ about conversion rates and all that other jazz.

    For example, if you’re selling low-margin generic consumer products, and your lifetime customer value is $23.87, you’d better be generating enormous traffic, then be able to convert enough at every stage of the process (particularly the opt-in acquisition one) to generate a ROI.

    If you’re selling business software packages or engagement rings, and your LCV is on the order of a high-margin $10K, that 4K looks better and better.

  • Was pretty funny to read this post and then see bounceexchange come up before I left! Guess they offered you guys some kind of free or mega discounted pricing?

    • Joanna Wiebe

      hahaha! Actually, yeah, we just added that yesterday — you’re too fast — and I need to update this post with a little note to explain. Basically it’s as you said: Bounce Exchange would like to change our minds, and we’re willing to let them try.

  • George

    I think it’s more of a customer targeting issue than a copy issue. Even the best copy and persuasion technology couldn’t persuade a struggling IM’er to pay 4K a month. On the other hand, somebody who works for a marketing department at a huge corporation wouldn’t blink at 4K a month if they could tell their boss they’d doubled the amount of their leads.

    • Joanna Wiebe

      I think the question is this: why would a marketer recommend Bounce Exchange (at $4K+) to her boss over the *seemingly identical* solutions that are a fraction of the cost? What case would she make for BX if her boss went and found that there are all these other cheaper dudes doing the same pop-up thing for way less?

      (BTW, we’ve worked in marketing for enormous, rich organizations, and the reality of budgeting doesn’t quite match the picture so often painted of money bags being shoveled into the marketing department.)

      So although I totally hear what you’re saying, it seems that something BX needs to do with their copywriting is clearly differentiate… or at least appear so completely, groundbreakingly amazing — esp with detailed testimonials and case studies that would floor big marketing teams — as to keep someone from considering the many cheaper alternatives.

  • Raj

    Great article. It is amazing how good copy can influence your thinking. As a consumer I suspect I would always be looking for social proof as a start, followed by a suggestion of ROI.
    I wonder how far Picreel could push their prices up until they actually saw a drop in sales. And would they have to test this in a live environment?
    Thank you for this eye opener.

  • Great analysis and comparison. It’s amazing that the cheapest of the lot is the most convincing. No doubt they could get away with raising their prices! Thanks for this informative study.

  • Yassin Shaar

    Thank you for this awesome review ! (do more of them)

    Worth reading couple of times.

    I would personally go with Pirceel, they have answered almost ALL of the questions i have and relieved my anxiety of needing to pay to try their product.

    I hope these guys check this blog post and learn a bit.

    Make your days great

  • I love the copy hackers posts. I used some of their posts to design a landing page and it was a real success in terms of conversion.
    We all have a tendency to surinvest in sophisticated technologies but most of the time the recipe for success is good technology + good design (=consumer/user/buyer/prescriber understanding)

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